I found this activity tricky because it was hard to think of what time connectives I could use. I am proud of the adjectives that I used. My next step with writing instructions is to make it easier to read when I publish it.
Friday, 21 November 2014
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I found this activity fun because I got to put my family in it. I liked including similes to make my writing more interesting. I found it tricky to make my punctuation correct. My next step with making sure all my punctuation more correct is to think about my editing more.
I found this activity tricky because I had to think of all the adjectives I could use. I am proud of the adjectives that I put in. My next step with using a descriptive hook is to use some more interesting adjectives.
My favourite part about making my giraffe was painting the background. I am proud of blending my pastel colours in the leaves.