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Wednesday 20 August 2014
Using different language features
I use a different language features to make my writing cool. I used a bossy voice for my story so it could be a scary hook. I thought it was a little bit hard because I din't know what to say.Next time i should do more planning.
Well done Hudson, you have used some great language features in your story to add interest and detail. I like how you used your voice to hook in your reader.
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I love the onomatopoeia you have used.
Well done Hudson, you have used some great language features in your story to add interest and detail. I like how you used your voice to hook in your reader.
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